Monday, December 18, 2017

Review -- "Raquel Says (Something Entirely Unexpected)" by Mois benarroch

Review by Dirnise -- "Raquel Says (Something Entirely Unexpected)" by Mois benarroch



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Have you ever wondered what your life would have been like if you had made different choices? ‘Can a path fork to the point where it creates two completely different people?’ This is one of the themes dealt with in the captivating and unusual book, Raquel Says (Something Entirely Unexpected) by Mois Benarroch, where the fine line between reality and fantasy is constantly blurred. 

In this book, the author wrestles with the integral bliss and frustration of being a writer where he ‘created [Raquel] from [his] foolish rib, from the rib of a frustrated writer’. The element of creation is a central theme in this book where a writer is compared to Elohim, the Creative Force of the world. 

With words God created the earth and with words a writer creates a world that lives on the pages of his book. Within those pages the writer can create and destroy, bring together and separate. ‘Elohim is the creative force of the infinite, and we will be that creative force one day when we know how to join one letter to another, one word to another.’ 

The brilliance of this poetic literary work is that the reader is left guessing right to the end whether the author is writing about a tangible person or a figment of his imagination. 

The chapters became very lengthy towards the second half of the book compared to the first ten chapters. The last chapter seemed almost out of place since it was written from the perspective of a different character. It was a sudden and almost grating change but bearing in mind the theme of two lives running parallel, two people experiencing life very similarly, the idea of living analogous lives was well supported.

Although it was thought-provoking reading material, I found it void of any definite structure. In the seventh chapter, it is noticeable that the grammatical rules of written dialogue was not followed which obstructed the flow of the chapter. This, however, might be charming to some readers as the author stated, ‘… literature and technique, it’s something you have to learn to hate after learning it, like learning to paint. Once you know how to use all the techniques, the real hard work is finding your own voice. What I’m looking for is really something further from what we call literature, but it’s not antiliterature either, because it would end up being the same thing’. 

I rate this book three out of four starsRaquel Says (Something Entirely Unexpected) offers the reader an intimate glimpse into the solitary and searching soul of a writer which I find both enthralling and enlightening. Loneliness finds a friend in a life that runs parallel to its own.

I would recommend this book to readers who are fascinated by the notion of living outside the boundaries of space and time where the past, present and future are relative concepts and people living parallel lives can come together in a moment outside time.

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Review -- Gates to Tangier by Mois Benarroch

Review by Rakshesh -- Gates to Tangier by Mois Benarroch

Post Number:#1 by Rakshesh » 03 Feb 2017, 05:24
[Following is a review of "Gates to Tangier" by Mois Benarroch.]

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Gates to Tangier is a book by Mois Bennarroch. This was my first book by this Author, which is translated by Sara Maria Hasbun.

Brief Story / Background

Upon death of the Father of the Benzimra Family, through his will, family comes to know of his son - of course - illegitimate - whose mother is a Muslim woman in Morocco. This does come as a surprise to the entire family. But they are not left with the choice as according to the terms of the will, in order to claim their share of inheritance, they must find that long lost son. Thus, due to compulsion family is forced to find that son. 

Thus starts a Journey which will bring them face to face with their roots and with their beliefs. This journey will involve travel to Tetouan, Morocco, from places as far flung as Jerusalem, Madrid, New York and Paris. Their quest to find that family member will be life changing is some way or the other for each of the family member. This journey will force them to think about their identities.The Brothers will have encounters with their lost brother, who will give them a surprise. What is the surprise - I am not reveling it - you must find out about that thing after reading this book.

During this book, one will come in touch with different facets and color of Israeli Society, differences between Eastern and Western cultures and like things. Mois Benarroch succeeds in taking the readers, through the Benzimra family history, the complex characters and the dialogue between them, to an historical and emotional journey. This book will introduce the readers to a world of complexities and nuances which do not come to light very often. 

To conclude, this was a nice book. The language was easy and lucid. And I liked the brevity and no nonsense approach of the Author. Every character has been given its due part and we live their life during the course of this book - each character will find something appealing about itself and we will feel a connection with almost all the characters of the book.

I will give 3 out of 4 Stars to this book and will certainly recommend this one to Readers who like Literature and good stories. Particularly those who like to read about diverse cultures across the globe this book will be a very good read.

I will also like to explore other work of this Author. So if you are one of those who like to read diverse books, go and grab this book without doubt. You won't be let down....

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Review -- Gates to Tangier by Mois Benarroch

Review by jimthorne2 -- Gates to Tangier by Mois Benarroch



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Gates to Tangier is an adventure in point of view for readers who are used to a single perspective. To read Gates correctly, one has to recognize the constant change of perspective from one character to another and back again. The writer leads the reader on a thought journey with just enough clues to provide interest and the anticipation that the problem introduced at the beginning will be solved.

Benarroch is a challenging writer who takes the reader on a journey in search for a child that no one expected in the deceased father’s legacy. The motivation for the search is money. When the father of the Benzimra family dies, he leaves a will informing his family of an illegitimate son he fathered with a Muslim woman in Morocco. The condition for receiving the inheritance is that the family do everything possible to find that child. The members of the Benzimra family speak throughout the book sharing thoughts and frustrations which exhibit their humanity and view of life.

Benarroch introduces his traditional themes of Sephardic identity, Morocco, and life as a journey. As a part of his opinion, God is someone who likes to see sacrifices and whom we must approach as beggars in prayer. He sees identity as an ever-emerging mirage through place and circumstance. Each member of the family speaks and reveals the nature of their identity from the compulsive Alberto to the confused Zohar.

Benarroch’s perspective is a Jewish view of family interests and conflicts. His tone is personal and penetrating with insights into people living in the struggle of our time. He keeps our interest by showing that modern travel includes but is not limited to travel by plane to various important places in the story. His writing is highly emotional with captivating dialogue but little narrative structure. I have never read another book like this. There is no author or title to compare.

The book is rated 3 out of 4. It is not rated better because the author expects the reader to figure out, without help, that the point of view is the point of the book. This expectation is a stretch that most readers will not appreciate. I don’t like the view of God that fails to recognize the God who Himself makes sacrifices. Also, his understanding of prayer as a complaint is too simplistic. I like the book because it challenges me to think outside my usual reading pattern. I also am Jewish friendly and appreciate the personal exposure from one who understands that point of view and can express it.

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Review by Fabiana -- Raquel Says (Something Entirely Unexpected)

Post Number:#1 by Fabiana » 14 Mar 2017, 07:48

[Following is a review of "Raquel Says (Something Entirely Unexpected)" by Mois benarroch.]

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4 out of 4 stars

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A beautiful love story of and about otherness. Raquel Says (Something Entirely Unexpected)by Mois Benarroch opens, as promised in the title, with an entirely unexpected, surreal premise: “Today, and only today, you may create a person” – these are the words that one day appear out of the blue on the writer’s computer. And thus emerges THE OTHER, the one who is the same but not quite, the half that could complete the whole.

Mois and Raquel’s chance encounter in their forties, while they live in different parts of the world and are both disenchanted with their family lives and life in general, opens them to a love they didn’t know existed. Soon their daily conversations, through emails and phone calls, become as vital as the air they breathe. What unites them is the deep, invisible and yet unbreakable bond of shared roots, shared history and the call to give that history a voice. Mois and Raquel are both writers, and they were born in the same city, the no longer existing Hebrew Tetouan. They are “the last Tetuanis”. 

Rather than finding one’s soulmate, the theme that lies at the core of this intimate and intense first-person narrative (with a twist) is the quest for identity, and literature itself. How does a Sephardic Jewish writer, born in Morocco and now living in Israel, find his voice and a sense of belonging? In an age of globalization and multilingualism, how does an immigrant escape the great sense of isolation that lies beneath the apparent unity of the big “melting pot”? How can one language feel harsh and oppressive, and the other, sweet and soothing? What creates the urge to write, to tell one’s story? What’s the secret behind the flow of words? Do words and writing have a mysterious power that can make parallel lines intersect outside the limits of time and space? 

Drawing on existential récit and autobiographical elements, Mois Benarroch tackles all these questions and more in his free flowing jeu d’esprit, an intricate web of thoughts, memories, hopes and dreams, in which are seamlessly interwoven the mystical and the mundane, prose and poetry, the past, present and future, what is and what could have been. Taking us through a maze of labyrinths and gardens of forking paths, where time and space can be distorted, suspended or even erased, where the virtual can be more real than the “real life”, and where at times silences can speak louder than words, Benarroch is presenting the readers with a literary puzzle: who is Raquel? The clues to the mystery are hidden in plain sight throughout the whole book. 

One of the things Raquel urges Mois to do, since he has written all his previous novels in Hebrew, the language of his adoptive country, or rather his land of exile, is to start writing in Spanish, his mother tongue. I must admit I was a bit baffled at first. As a literary translator, I’ve always considered multilingualism as a marvelous tool rather than an obstacle. So, what does it matter what language we write in, as long as we get our message across? After all, there I was, reading the English translation (and a pretty good one at that, I might add) and none of the book’s essence was lost on me. But then I read an excerpt of the same book in Spanish, and I understood. Here’s just one example. “I wait there. I despair. Wait there and despair, but.” The English translation conveys the message, but it doesn’t in the very least capture the breathe in-breathe out musical poetry of the original – “Espero. Desespero. Es, pero.” No, the soul and substance of certain words is untranslatable. 

I whole-heartedly rate this little gem 4 out of 4 stars. An intriguing and thought-provoking page-turner that will probably be best enjoyed by the more advanced readers who are not afraid to step out of their comfort zone. 

“By admitting five years ago my situation as an eternal immigrant, of being a country of one person, of being the eternal immigrant from that country, I found a room for me in this house called Earth. It’s a small room with no windows, but it has a door and a key.
Someday I’ll have to learn to leave this room.”

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Review by Pilar Guerrero -- Gates to Tangier

Post Number:#1 by Pilar Guerrero » 13 Mar 2017, 13:30
[Following is a volunteer review of "Gates to Tangier" by Mois Benarroch.]

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4 out of 4 stars

Review by Pilar Guerrero


Gates of Tangier is the third book of The Tétouan Trilogy, a historical fiction novel that explores the sufferings and ordeals that Jews have endured for centuries. The protagonists are five siblings of the Benzimra family from Tétouan. The story begins when a lawyer finishes reading the will of the protagonists’ father, who put his children a condition to receive the inheritance: the siblings must find their half-brother born from a Muslim woman around 30 years ago.

This clause puts the protagonists on a journey back to the village where they came from, and it forces them to confront and assume their identity and heritage as Jews, and also to come to terms with their own share of pain and suffering in life.

Even though the protagonists travel from different cities to meet at a Spanish airport and continue the journey to Tétouan, most of the plot takes place in the conversations among the characters, or in their interior monologues. These inner dialogues are powerful and portray the conflicts and the emotions that each sibling goes through. The author creates a multi first person narration technique which allows the reader to see the conflict from each sibling's perspective, so the reader can see a bigger picture of the story that none of the characters can see.

The plot develops as the characters speak and it unfolds at a steady pace on each chapter. In the third part of the story, the plot has a twist that gives the novel a new level of complexity and depth. All the loose ends are tied at the end, but the characters pose questions that may open up the story for a continuation.

What I enjoyed the most in this book were the poems between chapters, the author uses these to introduce other characters that the protagonists do not meet. A well achieved aspect in the novel is the creation of a common thread of pain and frustration in the characters about their lives and about being a Jew. All the characters mention this in their interior monologues, yet they all present it in different shades and manners, making them believable and relatable.

What I found difficult to follow were the dialogues between or among the protagonists, there was no clear indication about who was saying what, and I had to go back a couple of times to make sure that I knew who was speaking with whom.

The book contains only a few grammar mistakes that may distract from the story. I believe this is due to the translation process, I would still recommend a revision to make the narration flawless.

I rate this book 4 out of 4 stars: the story is engaging and the plot well-paced with a surprising twist, the characters talk about history as much as human emotions, making the reader feel for them. Despite the few mistakes, the narration technique is brilliant, especially in the use of poems to enrich the narration and to move the plot forward.

I would recommend this book to lovers of historical fiction, especially those interested in the history of Jews in the world. Readers interested in psychological novels may also find this book appealing.

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Saturday, December 16, 2017

Review by Donnavila Marie -- Gates to Tangier

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Post Number:#1 by Donnavila Marie01 » 13 Jan 2017, 06:35
[Following is the official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Gates to Tangier" by Mois Benarroch.]

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Gates to Tangier by Mois Benarroch is a history fiction book. We learned the suffering of Jews from history. They suffer from racial discrimination, territorial disputes, and religious beliefs. The Benzimra family is not an exception. This book narrates the story of the Benzimra family who fell apart because of their religious beliefs. They ran away from home to save their children and their children’s future. The four Benzimra children - Mesod, Silvia, Alberto and Isaque went separate ways.

After Mr. Benzimra's death, his lawyer read his testament to the bereaved family. The will divulged the existence of an illegitimate son. This illegitimate son is Yosef who lives with his mother in Tangier. The will demands the children to do everything to look for their half- brother. Tangier is the last place they wish to visit because of their misfortunes in the past. This mysterious testament forced Mesod, Silvia, Alberto and Isaque to start an uncertain journey.

Another victim of unfortunate events in Tangier is Zohra. Zohra was born and raised in Tangier but lives now in Paris. She finished her degree in gynecology with the help of a scholarship. She is trying to solve the puzzles of her life. She has a lot of questions left unanswered by her dead mother. Will she be successful in her quest?

This short novel is not just for entertainment sake. Rather, it is more of an advocacy about the vanishing race, identity, and culture of the Jews. I rate Gates to Tangier 3 out of 4 stars because of typos and grammatical errors. One might also be confused with the presentation of each character. Each character serves as narrator in the story. One must pay attention to each chapter to know who is narrating. At first, I did not understand the message of the story. As I advance in every chapter, I came to realize that this book is a treasure. Every page of it unfolds a heartwarming story of life.

What I love about this story are the poems used. "The world won't stop with us" is my favorite line from the poems. This line reminds me that I need to keep going. Whatever happens, life must go on. It presents a different twist and a surprising ending.

I strongly recommend this book to readers who love history. For those who want to have extra knowledge on the history and culture of the Jews, this book is an additional source. Human rights advocates may also read this book because they can relate so much to every page of this book.

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Review by michellet3143 -- The Nobel Prize

Review by michellet3143 -- The Nobel Prize

Post Number:#1 by michellet3143 » 20 Jan 2017, 22:29
[Following is a volunteer review of "The Nobel Prize" by Mois benarroch.]

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The Nobel Prize, by Mois Benarroch, is a fascinating story taking the reader on a psychological joy ride with many twists in a relatable way. As a work of science fiction, Benarroch does not overdo the science fiction throughout the whole book, but sprinkles it in here and there. The overall story of this novel is about a writer who is in a mental hospital and thinks he is one of his many characters he has included in his novels, everyday.

The novel is written as the writer (the main character) is speaking to his audience. He shares his difficulties with publishing novels and how that is placing many hardships on his life. For instance, he shares his struggle with his wife as a result of his low income, due to not publishing any novels. He then goes on to share with us how he is meeting an old friend who is also a writer at a mental hospital who takes on the persona of a different character he has written about every day. On top of that, he jots in a few other small story lines is this novel to keep things refreshing.

In the beginning of the novel, I was confused as to the main point of this story and I thought I might get disinterested as the story went along. Well, I was wrong... About a quarter into the book I realized that I was extremely invested and on the edge of my seat to see what creative twist Benarroch would take next. At one point, he even throws an alien into the mix, which just shocked me, but in such good way. Diving further into this book I started to see myself in the main character. He shared how his troubles were affecting his life, and he shared his worries about his own concern for his sanity. This openness with the audience truly involves our emotions and makes us question our own sanity, as we are involved in this story.

I really enjoyed the connection I was able to make in this book. However, I must say, the connection I made with this book is unlike any other connection I have ever made. I felt like my brain was spinning and I was reading chapters that were taking me into a different world. I did not feel like I was sitting on my couch in my house while reading this book, I felt more like I was on some strange ride at Disney World, almost like a more relaxed Space Mountain.

My complaints about this book would be that some of the transitions caught me off guard. For one moment, I was reading one scene, and then in another moment I would realize I was halfway through a scene and had not understood the whole first half. This was always overcome as I would read on, but the drawbacks were frustrating at times. Another large problem with this book was the professional tone. This book seems as it has not been proofread by a Native English speaker and that does distract from the story at times.

Overall, I give this book 3 out of 4 stars. I choose this rating because this book accomplished the feat of drawing me into this book, but at the same time had an unprofessional manner to it because of many grammar mistakes. However, at the end of the book I was able to take that five-minute stare into nothingness just thinking of all the feelings and thoughts this book brought out in me.

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Review by Mark Johnson ofThe Nobel Prize by Mois benarroch

Review by Mark Johnson -- The Nobel Prize by Mois benarroch

Post Number:#1 by Mark Johnson » 23 Jan 2017, 06:39
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3 out of 4 stars

Review by Mark Johnson

The Nobel Prize is a book of fictional prose by Mois Benarroch. It is a story within a story. On the surface the book is about an author who learns that an old colleague of his has been committed to a mental hospital and has dementia. The colleague named Jorge lives his life portraying the various characters he once wrote about. The main character then decides this would be a great idea for a novel and begins researching all the books that Jorge has written to learn of the various characters and personalities that Jorge might portray.

Underneath the main story is another story. The main character runs into other writing colleagues besides Jorge that had once belonged to the same writing group several decades before. Throughout the book the main character gives us insights into the writer's mind, how they interacted, and what they thought of each other.

Not only is this a good book with the use of a story within a story, but it is also a clever work of prose. At one point the main character is talking to Jorge, who was portraying a professor at the time, and asks the professor if he knows who Fon Franco is. The professor replies that he is a Planeta Prize winner. The main character asks a few more questions, then asks if he knows who Mois Bernarroch is. The professor replies that he is also a Planeta Prize winner. That is pretty clever because the author uses his actual name in the fictional conversation.

At times though, this book is difficult to follow due to the nature of the fine line it walks between dementia and reality. There is a purpose for it that drive you to the end, yet sometimes I found myself questioning what was going on. Then when I got to the end I wanted to read the book again; it was that good of an ending.

The audience would be adult readers who like fictional stories, or good works of prose. Due to a couple of scenes that are meant for adults, this book would not be appropriate for young readers.

I gave this book 3 out of 4 stars. While there is plenty to like about this book, I thought the editing could have been better. Page three the word right is capitalized for no reason. Same thing on page six, the word good is capitalized for no reason. On page 40 one sentence has two commas in a row where there should only be one. On page 51 there was a period at the end of a sentence, a space, and then another period. The next sentence began immediately following the second period. These are just a few examples.

Editing aside, this was a really fun book to read. I definitely recommend The Nobel Prize. This is the first book by Mois Benarroch that I have read and look forward to reading more by the author.

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